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took me forever, but i finished it today, might go back and make some changes.

:D first time ever doing snow

yay finals are almost over

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:iconmeganpan:
I think this is one of my favorite pieces from you ! :)
the onlt thing i would say to change is more contrast on the characters to make them blend in a little more with the contrast on the trees! Looks beautiful girly!

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i didn't want them to contrast to much with the bg, you know in most cartoons the backgrounds are more define then the characters. though i do notice i missed some shadowing :P ill fix it later i need sleep xD

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:iconfer-sure-phantom:
Great picture! no doubt it mustav taken some time but the effort really shows. The snow and the trees! Ah man it's just great, the whole thing just feels like a cool adventure :) Awesome work

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This is really pretty - I like the composition you have here and the snow is fantstic - you can tell the snow is falling hard, its lovely!

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Your composition is nice. One thing about it you need to pay attention to, though: the color. When things are further back, especially in a snowstorm like in this picture, the colors won't be the same as they are in the foreground. They desaturate the further back you get. You just need to lighten up the colors of the trees in the back. The snow and background is really nice. I'd add more depth to the snow resting on the trees, though.

You also need to work on your anatomy more. Some places are bulgy, out of proportion, and bending abnormally. Just keep practicing!

You have nice character designs. Simply apply the essentials to them!

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